Sunday, November 8, 2009

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Hello everyone, I hope you to had a great weekend. I enjoyed going to the cinima and saw very intersting movie. Also, I went to Dubai mall. I think it is very nide mall, tou can shopping there.







YASALAM



The NAtional - daily review



28 - october - 2009

this artical is in new sport in UAE , the goverment organized F1 race to be in AD, many F1 Contestants well come to Yas island and raceing,this is important to make UAE more important.


I chose this article becuase I thinke it is first time to be F1 in the UAE. This race will make YAS island more important and famouse place. This race will be a nice advertaisment. I think, after this race, the goverment will organize many races.

3 comments:

  1. I'm not sure that I'm understanding this summry. So not really sure.

    For me, no. Because I'm not intersting in racing.

    hmmm i dont think so there are no gramer and spilling mistake

    and thank you very much for your hard work mr.abood

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  2. It`s good summery because you don`t have mistake in grammar and spilling .

    And I`m interesting because you talk about F1 .

    ( =

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  3. Abdalla,

    Actually, there are a few spelling errors...
    - artical
    - goverment
    - well (will?)
    - raceing
    - thinke
    - famouse
    - advertaisment

    Please be careful of your spelling when you write!

    Also, overall, you've done okay for your first news journal, but try to add more details in your summary next time.

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